Front cover. Much improved. Masthead and pug look good. Image has very rough edges I think you should crop it more neatly. Bottom right corner needs more text. Use an original image on the bottom left. Contents: Going well so far, keep developing. All images need to be original.
DPS: Can’t read the full strapline - So re-adjust the position of text or the picture. Also need to fill the page as it’s a bit plain.
Front cover. Much improved. Masthead and pug look good. Image has very rough edges I think you should crop it more neatly. Bottom right corner needs more text. Use an original image on the bottom left.
ReplyDeleteContents:
Going well so far, keep developing. All images need to be original.
DPS:
Can’t read the full strapline - So re-adjust the position of text or the picture. Also need to fill the page as it’s a bit plain.